Eternal Embrace

I love experimenting with senryus so I thought I would make a poem out of a series of senryus.

 

Just simply tasting your breath

is all I would need

to put some spice in my life.

 

I know caressing your skin

would spark my passion

into an eternal flame.

 

If I could be the rhythm

to rock your heartbeat

our ballad would never fade. 

Reviews

[Brianna Brie]

Hmmm...your words have sparked a flame in my creativity. This poem inspires me! It is known as a string Senryu.

[Norma M Sutton]

I like it, but it feels unfinished.

[Stef Outsiders]

WOW!! I love this!!... just wow!

[Magdelena]

As always you rocked this... Once again I am clapping for joy.. Your words never stop amazing me Cowboy... Way to go!

Mags xx

[Robbie~xoxo~]

All three are devine! So enticing... Each Senryu emanates passion, creating a sensational imagery of the "Eternal Embrace". Nicely done.

[Kat Wildd]

amazing...I love it!

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem. Words are true. Taste and touch can change our direction. We all could use a spark to our eternal flame to rebirth the hunger to love and be alive again. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Kenneth The Poet]

Romantic brilliance. Plainly spoken, forever remembered.

[Tina Kline]

Wonderful. Very romantic and tender. Great job!