Christmas Colors

A holiday senryu

 

There is a need for

more red and less green within

our Christmas spirit.

Reviews

[J. J. Nightingale]

Well since we have less Green to worship, maybe some red will get through ..

I hear you .. Jazz :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Amen to that :)

[J. J. Nightingale]

XX J.

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~ brilliantly said, monsieur... i had an overdose of green today... i so understand what you mean... lol... :P

[Kenneth The Poet]

So much said in so little. You are the senryu master, Dale. I bow before you reverently.

[Dreamwind]

Thought provoking, but it made me think of red and green and trees and decorations and everything that goes along with it. smile

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Interesting small write for a Christmas meaning.

[LeeLee Ryder]

Spot on, RNRC ... Less shop til you drop and more time with
blood relatives & friends ... Thanks for sharing!
LLR

[The Analog Kid]

nice sentiments

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well said..

[WindSong]

Your words are like pearls upon the sands of time.

WindSong

[Shellie]

I like it- but for me- we associate red with blood and green with the green green grass of home! But i see what you mean!!!! Your good at the senryus!