The Trouble With A Vase

 

The roses are red

But without the roots to feed

The color blackens.

Reviews

[Emily B]

I always preferred fields of wild flowers anyway :)

perfect words

[Kenneth The Poet]

A master of the senryu. Truth told with so few words.

[Cherrie]

Now that’s a fortune cookie cowboy right there.
short sweet and to the point

[Ruth]

It so does...everything needs nourishment in life..affection/love/emotion...beautiful metaphor! xoxo

[Liza]

without her roots she wilts, no matter how much sweet nothings of breath you breathe out to the rose; she cannot collect life...