The Trouble With A Vase

 

The roses are red

But without the roots to feed

The color blackens.

Reviews

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amen ...

So to the point, and can be interpreted as many ways... beautiful.

[Brianna Brie]

Nice one! This is true. I think it implies a deeper meaning.

[Daytonight]

So very true! Great work! Keep on penning.

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Needs the nourishment
So true, so much packed in such a short verse.
Awesome
Everything and everyone needs some sort of noursihment

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Yes it does, excellent

[The Analog Kid]

I see you have been haikuing lately. Very profound. Well done!

[Dahlia Phoenix]

Graceful metaphor you have written. A haiku almost but with a clear message to give to all. :)

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Great poem that speaks truth about plants and even humans, well done!