The River

Inspired by Liza Vassallo's poem "The Knot"

 

 

Within the river’s currents

Is the thirst for knowledge you seek.

It will pull you through unfamiliar places,

The rush quick and scary

But it will expand your minds horizons.

Sometimes it will pull you under

To a place you never want to go.

When you resurface you’ll find

A better appreciation for

The air you breathe.

So jump right in and let uncertainty

Fill you up with spiritual wisdom

Cause standing on the shore

Will leave your soul high and dry.

Reviews

[Liza]

high and dry souls...its a place where lots feel safe - the surface of not feeling thirsty, wet or low...it will be met with resistance but those that believe that there is something to explore can appreciate this piece so thank you for allowing me to share and giving me the gift of inspiration through the connection made from the knot...

[Tina Kline]

I like this, its like the river of life, always going forward, encountering good moments and bad, but always learning, expanding and life goes on.

[LeeLee Ryder]

The river runs through it, doesn't it... Yes, your poem- TR carries a fast current filled with words of wisdom... Taking risks and searching thru the unknown definitely broadens our horizons. Thanks for the reminder...
Kudos, RNRC!
LLR

[?]

high and dry is a safe place, sometimes we need to jump in and get wet
Awesome piece

[SkinlessFrank]

Wise words, spoken clearly and with force.

All what we don't want, and don't want to see, or to be, can be relative with indeed some fresh air you breathe. Perfect ending! depth in high and dry... Beautiful write.

[Another Relic]

Smooth seas make poor sailors I guess. Your poems are always intriguing and inspirational and this is no exception. Great job.

[Kenneth The Poet]

You, sir, are a master of the unmincing of words. Straight and sharp.

[Ruth]

"Gotta be in it to win it" lol
Awesome love, I love this..you write with such grace and understanding...a sparkle? No no! You are a gentleman and open hearted soul who sees! xoxo

[Cherrie Palmer]

now thats a fact air is all the sweeter when you really live