The Moon(Reasons To Be)

The Moon(Reasons To Be)

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

 

If you were the sun

I would give up earth

To be the man in the moon.

Then I could bask

In the glow of your glowing heart

While enjoying your radiant exterior

That puts the smile on my face

No matter how far away you are.

You are truly a world-class beauty

With the mind, heart and soul to match,

Yet another reason to be the moon.

© 2011 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)


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Dale you got me on this beauty. You have the capacity to put so much emotion and feeling in such a few well chosen words. Clearly imprinted in the heart and soul and delightful as always

Posted 12 Years Ago


Sweet.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Love the metaphor through this...you wear your heart on the sleeve/screen Dale, love, something I have always admired about you and your work...beautiful! xoxo

Posted 13 Years Ago


The moon chases the sun but admires from afar - they're destined to live at a distance to shine for the earth and not destroy it - this reminds me of impossible love...the illusion carries us through but the longing inevitably sickens..

Posted 13 Years Ago


A compliment of millions for any love to be called the sun.
The brightest of all the stars that roam the never ending galaxy
The warmth it gives, the moon , shall keep high in the sky~
.. beautiful read this morning!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Marvelous just marvelous, lol
This was beautiful.


Posted 13 Years Ago


Lovely poem, your tenderness and affection for whoever this is about shines.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Defined and etched in romance and guilded beauty. Nicely done Dale. Smooth...very smooth.

Posted 13 Years Ago


To be the moon... I wouldn't know of such things since I can't manage a relationship for more then three days lol.. But I will live and dream within your poem..xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


Now these are brilliant words of love that touches a woman's heart! Beauitfully written, stunning I might add.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

It's better to be dead and cool than alive and uncool



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Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..

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