Scared To Death

Just some Halloween fun

 

Bump, bump, bump goes the night

Thump, thump, thump goes your heart.

The feeling of eyes in the shadows

Weighs heavy on your mind.

Every step you take

Sends a chill down your spine.

A glance over the left shoulder

Followed by the right

Produces nothing but paranoia.

Is that wicked laughter in your head

Or a trick of the moon’s subliminal command.

Your heals click quicker,

         Crunching leaves gets louder,

                  Breathing almost impossible

                  As if invisible hands grasp your throat.

Stumbling, you fall

Ripping your pantyhose,

All you care about is getting home.

Drawing closer

         Voices getting louder

                  While multiplying.

Now certain the beating you hear

Is your heart coming out your ears.

Finally the light is ahead,

You run without looking back…

Grasping the knob,

The feel of a hand on your shoulder.

Screaming as you turn to see

A blurred vision of the reaper greeting you.

Awaken to see the faces of

Witches, goblins, mummies and vampires

Observing you along with…

Alice In Wonderland and a smurf?

Dang you forgot tonight was

The big Halloween party.

You laugh in the face of death… of your pride.

Reviews

[Hotwater]

Just a lot of fun in this "tricky treaty" write, enjoyed! thank you for the entertainment!

*bird*

[?]

Oh my what a fun spooktacular piece!!
Love the unespected surprise ending.

[Lauren Beth]

Nice...I always like an unexpected ending! Especially when it is a happy one :)

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

exceptionally well contsructed fun mind romp through the lands of helloween~ lol

[emmajoy]

Brilliant build up, you really had me wide-eyed and ready for the scream, but then comes those wonderful last three lines. That's when a sense of humour comes in useful! Some great language in this, really appropriate, really scary,

' Is that wicked laughter in your head
Or a trick of the moon’s subliminal command.
Your heals click quicker,
Crunching leaves gets louder,
Breathing almost impossible
As if invisible hands grasp your throat.'

[Cherrie]

lol what a delghtful ham you are -- loved it --I what'a go

[.]

LOL..I had a feeling..and you delivered :)

[Kid Kirby]

Started off a like Poe and ended with a laugh. Good stuff.

[Kenneth The Poet]

I like the ending. A pleasant surprise to say the least. The journey there was intense too.