Made In (Insert Country Here)

Been reading Dean Koontz Frankenstein series... this popped into my head... but the poem is not about Frankenstein

Created with perfect parts

Sewn together with precision,

Still designed by man.

The stitches show

Your first imperfections,

The stitches coming out

Will reveal the rest.

Reviews

[Laura Sparkle]

short and to the point. I like it. I think it fits with whatever image the reader has in its head, for me, it reminded me of Oogie Boogie from The nightmare before Christmas. Keep it up!

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

dual play of metaphors cross stitched with ghostly threads ~involving the audience completely~ much enjoyed this write!~ words for deeper thought to be sure~

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the logic of the poem. Man's seek everything and forget the steps to doing the tasks correctly. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[The Analog Kid]

Lots in here. Man's imperfections, child labor, cheap clothing. Good short one!

[Desert Dreamer]

I see the double meanings here. So much cheap clothing that falls apart...and I see a chilling glimpse into the future as well.

[Daytonight]

Very well done! I really like this one. Keep on penning.

[MmeCorpse]

Oh wow I like this one. Very nice.