Too Cool(TooCold)

Being hearing James Dean by the Eagles a lot lately.

 

 

Standing there the epitome of cool,

like a James Dean Ice sculptor.

Not a hair out of place

but the time lines on his face

tell a different story.

Once he owned these streets

now he can’t rent a corner.

Not smiling in his youth

was part of the tough image,

but in these weaker years

there is nothing to make him happy.

The loner attitude was the match,

careless emotions the gasoline

that burned the bridges

to friends, family and love.

When you rebel without a cause

it eventually causes a rebel of one.

Reviews

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

very clever word winds around here~ and a very wise observation indeed~Jimmy Dean was way before my time~ but his legend tweaks curiosity across generational lines~ he died young so young~ wondering if he would have passed a lonely rebel if he'd lived~

[redflutterby]

Wonderful observation Cowboy. The actions of our youth may well affect the waning years of our lives. But we don't think of that while we are committing them. Love this....as I do all your poems!! ;-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are right about that... it is a ripple effect as they say.
Thank you :)

[Terohime]

Wonderful write, looking to read more .

~Resnera

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much... I look forward to checking out yours.

[PP]

You are so clever Dale..I love the way you adapt and create poetries from various other things..awesome!

"When you rebel without a cause
it eventually causes a rebel of one."

Those lines are just Superb, says a lot!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much. I just try to tell it like I see it.

[PP]

Which is an amazing things..Perception + Reflection = Perflection! Guess that is what I will name your poems :) lol

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Wow that is truly quite a compliment.

[Frieda P]

Great write of the song and his legend Dale, I have to laugh, my son's friends call him James Dean all the time, he's the middle guy, tells ya something right? ha...good one!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks Moonbeam... glad you enjoyed it.

[Frieda P]

My pleasure cowboy.

[Holly Mason]

super good writing piece truly
but hey he knew everything so why need others around to bother with their knowledge*)
thank you for sharing fine sir

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much for reading and adding your input.

[Marie]

I saw that movie. He really didn't have a cause, so he tried to invent one, and that didn't work either...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Exactly.

[AYVID N]

"The loner attitude was the match,
careless emotions the gasoline
that burned the bridges
to friends, family and love."

- This poem is so dead right. Such types usually end up alone.
Poetry full of wisdom. Cut and dried.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you sweets.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

very clever, I like your cautiously worded narration

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Sounds like something Social Distortion would sing about. This is true beyond measure.

Because of this poem, AA doesn't exactly mean Alcoholics Anonymous anymore.

[Missy Moooooo]

Nicely done i like your writing style(: