Not What You See

Oh boy getting philosophical

 

I may bleed one blood type

And have only one color of skin

But my veins are three-dimensional

And my pores very open.

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

You, my friend, are so much more than what one views on the outside.. So many years now I have enjoyed your writing and your encouragement, and these words speak volumes of the real you.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

intricate ~thoughtful~ love the composite of thought~never judge a book by its cover~ ! =)~

[Aidz]

Interesting, I like the imagery this one created for me

[closed account]

I can relate... I think.. you know poetry, it can be taken according to the reader!! I am closing my pores.. well trying too anyway haha

[Tina Kline]

Very nicely done. That describes just about all of us if we care to admit it.

[Liza]

getting philosophical :)

that's our nature lol

yes you're very open - that's your beauty!

[Seashell]

Deep...very deep CB
Well done.
Babs xx

[Helen Woodward]

They have to be don't they? We almost need to have twenty layers of skin to combat what is thrown at us at times, but it is the better person who stands tall and speaks their mind, one who can actually keep those pores open who will do the surviving.
There is so much wisdom in this piece Dale...just brilliant.

Blessssssssssss

[Daytonight]

Well done! Love this one.

[emmajoy]

Laughing at the comment .. philosphical you've always been, dear knight!
There's much dripping of thought in these four lines, fairly conclusive, and muchly taken. Clever, Dale, very clever!