Serainity

For Desert Dreamer's Three lines contest

 

Under the cover of no shelter

in the midst of a pouring rain

is where I find serenity.

Reviews

[Dayran]

The eye of the storm, to be worn like a badge. Quixote's walk to the gallows. Free.

[Kesha]

This is simple but is very deep, i like it and the way each word is formed carefully just makes it all the more enjoyable.

[Desert Dreamer]

I imagine going out into the summer rain, enjoying the water, being one with nature...there is no serenity quite the same as going out into the rain. Love this poem! Thank you!

[OT]

rain is pure and open indeed - no shelter - but rain free and unabashed, nice!

[Cherrie Palmer]

this is power packed and profound (for the third P) Peace is a state of mind and soul making a commitment to be at rest.

[WindSong]

A very compelling write. Your shelter is the heaven and the pourng rain washes away the grit and grime and purifies your soul. Very clever and inspirational words.

[closed account]

time and time and again.. lol sorry I just added to the end!!! love this one!! been a while since I have read anything!!

[MuSe Ampoule]

Dance in the rain! It's the purest thing we'll ever touch. This was a very lovely write!

[April Child]

Inspiration comes to us in the strangest of places! I love this image. Nice.