It is the all time American dream to become rich and famous. I wonder how many in hollywood are truly happy? This woman in your poem represent so many who want that which sparkles over that which is good for the soul. We think money and fame can fix everything get us into any where but what it does is isolate us and divide us from people. It is truly lonely at the top, how would you know that friend, or that lover is truly your friend or lover? Wonderful write my friend.
And how many times does this happen to artists ...
it's sad. This, however, is well written and reminds me
of a movie i watched yesterday, called CRAZY.
the truth is in these words as we manufactuer acts for a hungery audience..who buy the lies and the beauty for a chance to dream 'that could be me' and indeed be careful what you wish for
How very true! Too many young people (especially) get caught on the hop, taken to the top, used by anyone who wants a fast buck or quid .. the singer or actor or whatever, thinks the money, bright lights, booze and pills are what fame's all about .. until that day, when someone else comes along and the first one's dropped, allowed to slide into that six feet under. It's happened in every field of life, not just entertainment! Dale, as always you make the reader think with your wonderful way of writing, in this case, great lyrics. Be careful tho, love, don't let the bright lights dazzle you!
What a true poem for many who have achieved fame i would imagine.
We all need to be recognized - some go too far like this woman who now depends on pills and booze to ease her pain she gained with the fame when she lost her soul.
Hey you I love this because it depicts how many women and men in the world? Its a sad story and almost always leads to that same empty feeling. Guess some people really do have to try it to know its not good for them eh ? :)
Ps the stanza before last, you said She forget the price, I'm thinking you meant to say She forgets the price?
of course if i read it with an irish accent it sounds right haha :)
It's better to be dead and cool than alive and uncool
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Birth name: Dale Deadmond
Born November 20th, 1969
Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate.
This is my world of
my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..