Spiritual Bloom

Inspired by a picture I took

 

Watching the sunlight’s

Glowing touch

Highlighting the essence

Of what makes your birth pure

Serenity takes my mind

To the roots that connect you to Mother Earth.

This reaffirms my faith

In the invisible bond

Between me and the nature’s wild

Reminding me that

I was not born to be tamed

By the foundation built by “society”

But rather flourish

In the winds of change

So my seeds of thoughts

Can spread across the planet

Without limits

To what soils they grow in.

I know these white blooms

Are symbolic of me

When I let my mind

Become the sky.

Reviews

[Brette Medb]

This makes me wish for a warm day to just go sit outside and think. Let my thoughts wander to anything and everything possible to achieve in this world. As always your words tell a story within a story. Wonderful read as always :)

B

[Ladysue]

When I let my mind become the sky...what amazing lines...this piece is inspiring and beautiful...wonderfully done..

[Maggie]

Let my mind become the sky...beautiful ending line

[Poetic Beauty]

This has wonderful descriptions of nature and being spiritual goes hand in hand in my opinion. God created all and we should respect and enjoy the world's beauty around us. The way you put the words together in this poem make it a flowing and delicate poem.

[Helen Crutchett]

Oh wow Dale.....simply gorgeous. Excellently penned and a wonderful read. Bravo!

[emmajoy]

Wonderful, beautiful, sincere thoughts, a real man's conclusion .. understanding that Man is Nature not in reverse, that it is what should pull our strings .. not other two legged creatures and, so many of them - fools!

'When I let my mind
Become the sky.'

Yessssssss!

[Phibby Venable]

this is a beautiful, expansive piece of work/ I especially like the
ending. you have such broad views and always touched with truth.

[MuSe Ampoule]

Beautiful piece, poetry in it's finest form. Humans forget we're animals, created of the earth, for the earth. A spiritual re-awakening should be had by all and marvelous to see yours was inspired in this blooming orchard.

These last few lines moved me:
I know these white blooms
Are symbolic of me
When I let my mind
Become the sky.

[Lachenille Papillion]

This is oneness, the expansion of a single soul that recognizes that each piece is indeed the whole. Just beautifully written and I love the photo that accompanies this one. hugs

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I spit on 'society' (lol) This is beautiful. When i let my mind become the sky reminds me or rather makes me think of a vast openess of mind , having an open mind is pretty essential in my opinion.
Beautiful picture and the poem just as.

Chloe