Voyeur Moon

Short but has meaning

 

The moon stares down

at an unmarked grave

awaiting the time

it can smile upon

blood rich soil.

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

Darkly moving and rich with emotional stirrings... your words create such an image of haunted landscapes of night...

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

This is very dark indeed...I can totally see the moon reflecting blood red, instead of its usual pearly white. Great write-uniquely dark! I can see this poem as the basis of a macabre story...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so very much :)

[Pryde Foltz]

That's one evil moon … short but packs a bunch, this piece.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you.

[Frieda P]

Oi what a sinister moon....'I see dead people'...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

No, that is just me without a suntan, LOL

[Rossen]

this moon will out last us all...and maybe sooner then we think!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you for your thoughts.

[Brianna Brie]

Ooooh spooky! You have turned a shiny moon of romance into something dark and sinister. Awesome!

[Theresa C Newbill]

In the darkness, there is always light. In the sight of death, there is illumination of spirit. Beautifully done.

[Another Relic]

Aren't people supposedly more crazier on the night of a full moon? Hmm, could the moon be more evil then we think? Whatever the meaning, I like it.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I have read this one over several times. I am thinking the moon awaits the craziness of the night to begin. Humankind especially seems to lose their minds and often become violent when the moon is full........very thought provoking, excellent piece.

[emmajoy]

Read three times, still not sure, but feel it could be time's enrichment of an Earth that's gradually been or being bled dry. To write words that make people think, whether right thoughts or wrong, is a skill .. you have it.