I cannot write a Haiku.. but you can.
I love these three lines. Especially like the last line.
A heart that lights the way, keeps one safe and warm.. beautiful.
Good luck.
This is filled with the imagery of love's passion and richness... two people fulfilling their lives within each other... This is how it should be... sitting here sighing, my friend.
romantic, pretty, tender. Very nice, Dale. Present it to your valentine and I'm sure she'll go all ga-ga on ya. nice work and good luck with the contest!
Wow...her lips wine to drink, her heart a rose bouquet that gives, my heart a candle that burns for her. That is how I perceived it anyway. Lovely haiku!! Thanks for entering the Valentine's Haiku contest. :)
It's better to be dead and cool than alive and uncool
About
Birth name: Dale Deadmond
Born November 20th, 1969
Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate.
This is my world of
my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..