Wine, Roses And A Candle

Wine, Roses And A Candle

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
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For the Valentine's haiku contest

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Her lips are my wine,

Her heart like a rose bouquet,

My heart her candle.

© 2011 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)


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It's what I call 'strong, meaningful and piercing the point'. Well done!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very romantic and I see her lips, the wine, the rose and the candle all as a deep lovely shade of red. Outstanding. I love it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I cannot write a Haiku.. but you can.
I love these three lines. Especially like the last line.
A heart that lights the way, keeps one safe and warm.. beautiful.
Good luck.

Chloe

Posted 13 Years Ago


Lovely Haiku, well put feelings and imagry:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


romance is in the air

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is filled with the imagery of love's passion and richness... two people fulfilling their lives within each other... This is how it should be... sitting here sighing, my friend.

Posted 13 Years Ago


its so cute! 100/100

Posted 13 Years Ago


romantic, pretty, tender. Very nice, Dale. Present it to your valentine and I'm sure she'll go all ga-ga on ya. nice work and good luck with the contest!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love this...excellent haiku....this is truly beautiful...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow...her lips wine to drink, her heart a rose bouquet that gives, my heart a candle that burns for her. That is how I perceived it anyway. Lovely haiku!! Thanks for entering the Valentine's Haiku contest. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

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Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..

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