Wine, Roses And A Candle

For the Valentine's haiku contest

 

Her lips are my wine,

Her heart like a rose bouquet,

My heart her candle.

Reviews

[OT]

a nice senryu here!! you're good at these!! and this one is no exception, well chosen words makes for a great read!!

[?]

Such a romantic
Very passionate lil poem here
love it

[Inci 2]

surely the shortest but most allegoric poem i've read so far

[Joanna Maharis]

This is really beautiful and so passionate.

[Narnie]

A shining light, eh? I can see you are taking this haiku thing seriously. They seem to fit the valentine mood perfectly. :)

[EmpressPoetess]

...And your love lights the way! Soft, charming poetry! I love it!

[Lauren Beth]

Beautiful, sweetly romantic haiku...very very nice Dale. You know the way to a woman's heart...wine, roses, & candles, lol

[.]

ahhh...sigh..you old romantic..

[emmajoy]

Perfect haiku and beautiful thoughts.

[Kerry O'Connor]

How beautifully concise - a loving and compelling message.