Wine, Roses And A Candle

For the Valentine's haiku contest

 

Her lips are my wine,

Her heart like a rose bouquet,

My heart her candle.

Reviews

[Sheila Kline]

How did I miss this one???? It is beautiful my friend - so very romantic!!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you young lady... you know I am a hopeless romantic.

[ErosNthanatos]

The best...simple yet direct an arrow straight to the heart. Perfecto.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much :)

[Marie]

Beautiful. I also am entering a haiku in the contest.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you :)
This is a senryu and it is not for a contest.

[J. J. Nightingale]

Reminds me of a birthday .. magic candles on a cake
No matter how I tried
My breath never blew them out ..

Very good Dale ... :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much Jazzy xx

[J. J. Nightingale]

XX ... :)

[Ayvid N]

This is Simply Gorgeous...
A winner!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you... so are you.

[Ayvid N]

:))))

[Muse]

awwee...enough said. :)))

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Another great Haiku, Cowboy. Congrats once again!

[Fran Marie]

a very romantic piece~ soo nicely expressed

[Poetic Beauty]

This is all summed up quite nicely

[Nothing Personal]

Perfect for the occasion :-)