Sweet Words

something fun for the Valentine's Haiku contest

 

She said I love you,

All her words after that were

Chocolate coated.

Reviews

[Sherwette]

Love it! :)

[panheadpigments]

Oooooooooh, short but really good!!!

[An owl on the moon]

I read this through several times and just grinned. It brings about a sense of better on better. Sweet with sensual.. Wonderfully done!

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Great Haiku, Cowboy. Congrats on winning this contest!

[EmpressPoetess]

Congrats on your sweet win!!

[Desert Dreamer]

Such sweet words...a great Valentine poem.

[MandaBear]

wow short and sweet and to the point. i like it good job

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Oh, this is sweet.. chocolate coated. I like this .. never have tried writing a Haiku.
Sweet and romantic.

[?]

oh wow, short but says alot.
mmmm chocolate, this was just simply wonderful. It just says so much. Romantic

[Narnie]

Hmmmm, yum. I hope they didn't have brazil nuts in them too. :P Fab Haiku, cowboy.