I Am The Stem

Saying goodbye

 

You are the dream that captured my sleep.

You are the light the sun could never be.

You are the beauty no mask could hide.

 

Now as I say goodbye

Just know…

 

This hole in my heart

Will be a permanent space

Cause without you

Love is the stem

Without a rose.

Reviews

[Stacey]

Ahhhhhh how beautiful RRC! There's an elegance in learning how to say goodbye and you've shared it beautifully in words. If someone can leave that kind of stamp on your heart they're the ones we remember...because they had relevance in our today. Lovely words and wonderful write!

[closed account]

yea... felt this one.. alot of sadness..

[Jenny Nelson]

Very sad and forelorn, yet quite touching and beautiful.

[Wildfleour]

What an image...those last two lines....wow..... :(

[Erotic Goddess]

A bitter image....a barren desolate stem lacking color and light...beautiful sadness Dale, very well written!

xxoxx

[Kerry O'Connor]

Ouch! I felt that one...