Power Of The Heart

A senryu

The heart can always

Change what is in the mind, but

Never in reverse.

Reviews

[Rossen]

well put

[?]

So very very true, the heart speaks the truth and cannot lie.
A very powerful short piece here. Short but speaks volumes.

[Dische]

Wow that is so true

[.]

reviewing again because I can..this is perfection, senryu heaven!

[emmajoy]

Brilliantly clever, superb meaning. One of the best senryus I read in here and true.

[Joanna Maharis]

Everything you state in this piece is absolutely true. Especially since the heart knows things that the mind cannot comprehend.

[OT]

nice senryu!!! you've done it very well it's hard to effectively convey anything in 3 lines but this is good!!! well done!

[E.H. Monroe]

A haiku done right simply.
Japanese stlye with a twist at the end.
Its balls to move with a haiku friend. Nice flow

[Magdelena]

Simple yet so powerful for the truth it holds. Well done my friend.

Mags xx

[Shellie]

i find them hard to try to write, tho i get the concept.you did a great job x