Emotional Race

Emotional Race

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
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My mind and mouth are

The tortoise and the hare though

 My foot lacks the luck.

© 2010 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)


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Oh my, aren't we all guilty of being as this? lol...........great play on words!!
The rabbit's foot is in the wrong place, and our mind is often just too slow!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


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haha! very very witty. my foot loves to live inside my mouth as well, so i try not to speak often ;) with so few words you speak so much truth here. LOVE IT

Posted 14 Years Ago


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lol very clever :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


A very cute piece of writing.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Short but yet agian not short in passion. Good job

Posted 14 Years Ago


simple yet wonderful! good work

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is great, I like it a lot. I take this as humor, it made me chuckle so I hope I'm not way off on that!

Posted 14 Years Ago


lol Oh I do like this one.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Lovely...and it made me think...great job Dale, I think that you are good at these short and inspiring pieces.

xxoxx

Posted 14 Years Ago


I really like this- simple. :)
Yeah, I'd say senyru because it's topic isn't a season. Damn good senyru though. :)

-Coral-

Posted 14 Years Ago



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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

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Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..

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