Emotional Race

 

My mind and mouth are

The tortoise and the hare though

 My foot lacks the luck.

Reviews

[Dezaraye]

This made me giggle and reminded me of the phrase, "Open mouth, insert foot." My mouth often acts before my brain catches up.

[Liza]

thats pretty interesting....some emotions rush while the others slow down...and the body goes no where...?

[Brianna Brie]

This is very interesting. Which is with which? I am trying to match up the tortoise with the mind and the hare with the mouth. Falling back on the character traits from the nursery rhyme. The last line makes this even better! Super!

[Coyote Poetry]

True words. Last line is face. Strong words. Thank you.
Coyote

[huntress]

I so relate to this..short. sweet. and perfect work

[The Analog Kid]

Very clever mind bender:)

[just rose.]

Perfect. A brain twister, but true!

[Georgia Gypsy]

I really enjoy this, an can sooo relate to it!

[Ladysue]

This made me laugh. Very witty indeed! Great wording...excellent...

[Poetic Beauty]

lol this is quite funny but often true.