Unbelievable

 

They say that seeing is believing

Yet every time I see you

I find it hard to believe

Someone more beautiful

Than nature’s canvas.

I have plenty to say

When I look at your face

But words can’t come out

When your breath is taken away.

Though suffocating feels so right

When heaven is just a blink away.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A very beautiful poem. Kind and gentle words took me on a journey into the beauty of a woman you love. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Marie Harrison]

Absolutely beautiful. A woman would just melt to have these words spoken to her. Brilliant poem.

[*** Hey Jude***]

Dale you have an amazing gift to actually that actually allows the reader to "feel" the words you write! These words carry exquisiteness and are definitely heavenly! ~ Judi ☺

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a great poem about how someone so special can have you tongue tied and make your heart beat so fast you can feel it in your chest.

[Ladysue]

oh my cowboy, this has a surreal feel to it. A peace like heart like quality...very thought provoking and beautiful flow...The title says it all...

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*sign* that's lovely..