Unbelievable

 

They say that seeing is believing

Yet every time I see you

I find it hard to believe

Someone more beautiful

Than nature’s canvas.

I have plenty to say

When I look at your face

But words can’t come out

When your breath is taken away.

Though suffocating feels so right

When heaven is just a blink away.

Reviews

[Ruth]

Oooh such rapture in a few lines! :)
Lovely sweet!
Some serious adoration here!
xx

[Angelalala]

beautifully penned. r&r cowboy you have captured the essence of beauty in this poem. simple but eloquently put. love those last 3 lines. amazing write.

[Erotic Goddess]

Beautiful sentiments...and lovely I might add to read. I enjoyed this...short and sweet!

xxoxx

[Cafe Reader]

Beautiful expressions!

[Desert Dreamer]

Wonderful, this feeling of having beauty take your breath away, you have described the feeling so well.

[Angel Bird]

Beautiful and breathtaking in its resonance. These words cast a bright shine.
Outstanding!

[Georgia Gypsy]

Oh wow. This took my breath away with reading it!

[Tina Kline]

Very romantic and playful, you see heaven in their eyes, your whole world exists with them. Very beautiful words expressing love.

[Norma M Sutton]

What a interesting range of expressions in this piece. I like it.

[Liza]

a brief pause to admire beauty...the words you selected define the feeling of one perceiving something "incredible" - surpassing belief....great title...compliments every line.