The picture is striking, and your words certainly do capture the lovely aspects of fall. Your descriptions make me want to head for a mug of apple cider and piece of pumkin pie!
And, oh how fitting are the last lines in which you remind us that there is hope after defeat!
A wonderful poem!
I sat in my lawn chair today feeling the warm sun, knowing the leaves will soon be changing colors and falling. Autumn for me is a time of renewal. Its a chance to start over and improve over the year before. Mostly, its a time to enjoy the brisk air and seasonal paintings autumn brings.
This is one I never saw from you and its just as good and exciting as when you first wrote it.
Good poem Dale
Relic.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Correction: I meant to say its just as relevant as when you first wrote it. :)
Dale...This is beautiful...I love the Autumnal feeling also. It is a busy time here as folks start to prepare for the long winter. I smiled as I read this, because I sit in my garden with a cup of tea every morning after breakfast, and have just these thoughts as I stare at my big old tree, which tells me lots of stories. However I am in dire need of my brekky now...so I must get up and crack on.
Thanks for share
Babs xx
Beautiful! And we so miss that call, don't we? There is life and rebirth even in the darkest side of nature....helps me to remember that through the winter lol
I adore Autumn but dread the darker nights and other aspects of it...claustrophobic to me....
This is glorious love!
xx
I love the fall. I remember a trip I took to the mountains in North Carolina and the colors were simply breathtaking. The reds reminded me of fire and the golds were like beautiful stunning jewels. Simply a glorious scene. This was a very beautiful and stunning piece. It is nice to see the earth change.
It's better to be dead and cool than alive and uncool
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Birth name: Dale Deadmond
Born November 20th, 1969
Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate.
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