Not Your Picaso

A Rebel with a senryu- inspired while listening to "I Dare You" by Shinedown

 

Paint me a mirror

But still my reflection won’t

Have your signature.

Reviews

[KAOlmsted]

Awesome. I really like this, Dale. Great stuff.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you vacker... I knew you would appreciate it.

[KAOlmsted]

My pleasure...yes, I do.

[lee von cleef]

Mona and lisa
clenched along the lockers
Bookfacing the old way

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Okie dokie, LOL

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Shinedown does have good music. And you do have good writes, I love this. It speaks so much with just enough. I love how you used "paint me a mirror" instead of just any mirror. The way you have the last two lines, says so much about a person and their self, their signature.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Yes they are a great band... and thank you so much. Glad you liked it.

[Frieda P]

O.O ahhh abstruse like yourself...love it!!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Are you calling me difficult... I prefer to think of myself as strong willed, LOL
Thank you.

[Frieda P]

Oooh is that what that word means!? My apologies, I thought it meant sweet and endearing. ;-P

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Yeah right... tell that to the hand :p

[Frieda P]

Does that hand hold a beer by chance? ;-P

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Of coarse.

[J. J. Nightingale]

A picture painted in silence
Ghost fingers tracing the ways
I can only dream of our rainbow days..

I hear you ... Good One ! ... Jazzy

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much Jazzy xx

[Narnie]

Yes, individuality should be owned at all time. You have a great music list :) I'm not a haiku fan but can definitely see that this captures the spirit and the continuing spiral once your eye leaves the page.

[Kerry O'Connor]

An abstraction most suitable to the idea of a Picasso. I like this convoluted image very much.

[Liza]

love it still - three months later i see something different and just as interesting....we are not defined or confined to the paintings of others - its just one tid bit of projection from their limited minds...

[Miss Coral]

Awesome piece- love the depth and emotion in this tiny little piece- great little shot. :)
-Coral-

[An owl on the moon]

You bring about the most poignant depth within the simple form of the Haiku. It just amazes me that you can pour such emotion into this cup... Powerful!