Since You

Getting in touch with my romantic side

Every four leaf clover

Is nothing more

Then a part of nature’s turf.

 

If I had a rabbit’s foot

It would merely be

Something fuzzy in my pocket.

 

To throw a penny

Into a fountain

Is just a way to waste money.

 

I still find rainbows

Genuinely beautiful

But lacking any real substance.

 

That is how I have

Come to see

These magical enigmas…

 

Since you came

Into my life.

 

For I could never be luckier

Then having your heart

Beat with mine.

Reviews

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

haha! I thought you were infected with cynicalism. but you gave us a beautiful twist when you explained that you have all the luck you need. the poet i remember and love. I'm sure I'll be inspired!!

[Brittany W]

This is really sweet, it was romantic and written really well, great job.

[An owl on the moon]

This truly is a beautiful expression of love.. of living a deeper life because of another. It lifts the reader to long for such a relationship. Romantic and richly painted.

[Wicahpi]

awww how sweet!!!

[Erotic Goddess]

Ah Dale, such sweetness in these words! I woke up too early to go to work and thought I would stop in here, and I am glad that I did! This was a good wake-up call!!!

xxoxx

[Seashell]

wawwwwww so cute and as we all know....straight from your heart. Now then...I wonder who the lucky girl is ???

Nicely written.
Thanks for share

Babs xx

[Angel Bird]

This is beautiful Cowboy. I like it how your sense of reality changes during this poem while finding true love ...

- For I could never be luckier
- Then having your heart
- Beat with mine.

A truly romantic and beauty filled poem. Wonderfully done.

[Ladysue]

oh so romantic and thoughtful...it is beautiful and so lovely...it brought a smile to my face...wonderfully done...

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Very nicely done. It's simple yet fun and full of love which must be someone truly special.. sweetly inspirational!

[Ferg]

lovely!