A Whisper Of Wind

Just a little something

 

 

A whisper of wind

is nature expressing

the importance of humanity.

 

So stop the roar of gossip

and deafening selfishness

before a hurricane

becomes the only means to an end.

Reviews

[Georgia Gypsy]

Too often people wrap themselves up in gossip, and indeed cause a storm with their lies and falseness....it can be very ugly.
But your words make it sound like a softer event, and not quite so harsh. Perhaps with enough warning, people will cease to stir the storms up and be content in truth.
;)

[Brianna Brie]

Excellent nugget of truth. Loving your creativity.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you Brie, always good hearing from you.

[Brandon S. Whitten]

An excellent reminder to quiet self and listen. Splendid read and write.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you sir.

[Ayvid N]

In good times we do get lulled into a lazy and selfish existence, getting drawn to all the petty evils of human nature. This is a very well-worded reminder to wake up and take stock, and straighten out.

Loved it.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Very wise words beautiful. Thank you for sharing.

[Ayvid N]

You are welcome :)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

You know I want to see the hurricane... Nature has its own way of fixing things... Dispose of the gossip and release the wrath... That's when people really come together in the face of adversity...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Very good points... nature does not bow to us, we bow to nature.

[Norma M Sutton]

Love this. Especially the first line of the second stanza. Wish the media would stop with the gossip rag stories. Glad I got rid of my TV

[Raven]

This needs to be sent to all persons upon earth.

[Tannen Dell]

This is good. You should consider submitting some of your poetry to Indigo Rising Magazine. You can find it at indigorisingmagazine.com .

Cheers,

Tannen Dell
Editor-in-Chief

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Excellent work..Wonder if that would really happen? This is metaphoric language of course..Good work..Enjoyed..Glad that I chose this one to read...Sunflower

[emmajoy]

'Sometimes wonder why the worst people have the loudest voices and the most vicious tongues.

Your beautiful words say it so very truthfully.

[Ruth]

EXCELLENT!
Love it!
A brilliant metaphor, nature, for the action of mankind:)
Unique!
I like it a lot love
xx