To Love Thy Lady Shakespearian Style

A fun attempt at a different style.

 

To truly love one's soul fully

Is to let your passion burn

Like eternity has come and gone,

Appreciate every ounce of beauty

Flowing from thee truest one’s heart,

Memorize every line, curve, smile

So when separated by miles

They are never more then a blink away.

Let not false distractions

Of mundane duties nor flesh of strangers

Cast sins upon your heavenly devotion,

Layin' it to rest in the depths of hell.

For when the one

That brings out heaven within

Thy heart like a prayer answered

They should be worshiped not forsaken

Or life shall become a self-purgatory.

 

 

Reviews

[Hustle Consciousness]

It sounds like what to do with a great love once u find it you hold on to it treat as if the best thing u cant live without however for if "forsaken ....life will become a self purgatory" Powerful poem! It touches on many levels of what language used to be about when the language was love such as Romeo and Juilet!

[Moonflower]

Beautiful language, this is very well written, sir

[G. Marie"floating on an..]

I stumbled across this poem and I love the message here. spoken from a shakesperian heart of gold. beautiful words spoken here to the heart

[Poetic Beauty]

this is a true testimony of love and keeping true to the person even when distance separates them. A devotion so strong that no one else can quench that thirst but the one you hold dear in your heart. this was done with style and grace flowing like a masterpiece created for one person in mind. This truly blew me away. I think you should write in Shakespearean style more often for it suites you well.

[Norma M Sutton]

kinda neat. I think I like how it works.

[Forever Mine]

I dont know what to say to this ! Like your other work, this amazed me.