The New U.S.A.

 

Mainstream worship

         Establishes

Pinpoint ignorance.

 

Marshal law changes

         Ignite

                  Hypocritical delays.

 

Cracked media mirror

         Distorts

                  Rightwing’s reflection.

 

Sophisticated self destruction

         From

                  God complex Government.

 

The USA

         Soon to be…

 

                  The Unidentifiable States of Armageddon.

Reviews

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Well wow is this impressive~ You added it when i wasn't on this site so i missed this short and sweet gem. You are most likely right about this ..last line is great as is this verse...
"Cracked media mirror

Distorts

Rightwing’s reflection"

Very good i love it!

Chloe

[The Analog Kid]

You discussed a lot here in the little poem. The disingenious media, a gov't out of control that thinks it knows better for everyone, how religion distorts. Powerful. Good stuff!

[Ed Hart]

and that's a wrap

[Miss Coral]

Got better and better, until the powerfully hitting last line. Great piece. c:

[Norma M Sutton]

Scarily accurate.

[Poetic Beauty]

The last line of this poem strikes a cord with me. There are so many issues that "we" stick our nose into and don't belong there. We need to start thinking about our actions before we take them. this whole poem is talks about the many issues we have as a country and we need to fix things or the end line just might happen.