The New U.S.A.

 

Mainstream worship

         Establishes

Pinpoint ignorance.

 

Marshal law changes

         Ignite

                  Hypocritical delays.

 

Cracked media mirror

         Distorts

                  Rightwing’s reflection.

 

Sophisticated self destruction

         From

                  God complex Government.

 

The USA

         Soon to be…

 

                  The Unidentifiable States of Armageddon.

Reviews

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Well wow is this impressive~ You added it when i wasn't on this site so i missed this short and sweet gem. You are most likely right about this ..last line is great as is this verse...
"Cracked media mirror

Distorts

Rightwing’s reflection"

Very good i love it!

Chloe

[Naomi Montana Walsh]

You did a great job here..I keep thinking these same things and you made them into poetry. I like the simple beat it has not too much just right.

[Liza]

so many ugly truths in each line; how we try to protect and become the enemy while showing heroic actions.....

[Narnie]

We watch the USA on our news over here in the UK and just cross our fingers that soon there will be positive strides.

[Marie Harrison]

Wow! This is a radical poem. I should have drank coffe before I read this. Way to go! Love it!

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words are scary and very true. The smokers are a prime example. Lost all their rights without knowing what happen. Health care is a big joke. It isn't the poor and middle class that is the problem. It the high cost of Doctors and the Lawyers doing their best to keep their income coming. Last line is fact. No great change had been made in the USA without a small revolution. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[JENY]

Very profound…
Thought provoking….
Very creative…
Liked your style very much….

[JennyNicole]

Brilliant and so true. I feel very lucky to have had the freedoms that the USA provides, but its hard to deny that we're sinking fast and I don't see any of us changing fast enough to reverse the process.

[Wicahpi]

Amen to that!!! Brilliant Write :)

[Bud]

Yes, that is the direction we're coming upon so ever quickly. Thought provoking.