Without Hesitation (No Reservations)

 

  

You say you can’t see,

See what I see…

Maybe it’s because

You don’t try,

Your unique womanhood

Makes you beautiful on the inside

And your natural femininity

Makes you sexy all over.

I’ve never seen anything

More stunning

Then you in the glow

Of the bedside lamp,

Your face bare and pure.

I’m always left

Astounded how you find simple solutions

To things I found complicated

All my life…

And how you open my eyes to things

I have been voluntarily blind to.

They say you should never lay it all on the line,

Treat love like a game…

I see that as the quickest way to lose

Everything (in my case you)…

So truth be known

My heart is so complete

With you in it

That every beat feels

Like a kiss from your sweet lips.

Without hesitation,

No reservations

I am yours.

Reviews

[closed account]

a simple statement of unconditional love, what I love is that it is simple... that is how love should be!! I love this beyond words...... I may have said this in the past but todate??? MY FAVORITE LOVE POEM OF YOURS!!.... right from your soul!!! lucky women.. :-)

[The Analog Kid]

"I’ve never seen anything
More stunning
Then you in the glow
Of the bedside lamp,
Your face bare and pure."

Beautiful sentiments. Romantic, but not sappy. Nice "curvy" presentation of the text!

[MagiCrystal]

Aw.... Dellito the poet in you.. has arise.. amazing

[J.Black]

"I’ve never seen anything
More stunning
Then you in the glow
Of the bedside lamp,"

God, what an image that was! So lingering! I love this. People see things in a whole new different shade of light. Beautiful.

[An owl on the moon]

This is a beautiful, sensual, romantic expression of love.. devotion that is deeply felt and experienced. You voice your love in the strongest way, yet with a tenderness as well. Wonderfully written, my friend.

[Enigmatic Amor]

You have created something very special and touching here. It is honest and speaks so clearly to one woman of the touching things about your relationship with each other.

This is true romance, lovely of you to share it.

[Joanna Maharis]

This piece is so lovely. It makes for a beautiful greeting card. You should submit this piece to Hallmark greeting cards. They are always looking for fresh writing for their cards, and they pay all the writers who get accepted by them.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

A beautiful love poem and one of commitment .. with no hesitations..
I’m always left

Astounded how you find simple solutions

To things I found complicate

All my life…

And how you open my eyes to things

Good to have this feeling in a relationship.
Finding someone to complete you, us anyone- heart and soul is a gift.. like love.

Chloe
xo

[Norma M Sutton]

This is nice. We never see ourselves the way other's see us.

[Jenny Nelson]

How open, honest, and beautiful. A very genuine, sweet piece. Wonderful!