Without Hesitation (No Reservations)

 

  

You say you can’t see,

See what I see…

Maybe it’s because

You don’t try,

Your unique womanhood

Makes you beautiful on the inside

And your natural femininity

Makes you sexy all over.

I’ve never seen anything

More stunning

Then you in the glow

Of the bedside lamp,

Your face bare and pure.

I’m always left

Astounded how you find simple solutions

To things I found complicated

All my life…

And how you open my eyes to things

I have been voluntarily blind to.

They say you should never lay it all on the line,

Treat love like a game…

I see that as the quickest way to lose

Everything (in my case you)…

So truth be known

My heart is so complete

With you in it

That every beat feels

Like a kiss from your sweet lips.

Without hesitation,

No reservations

I am yours.

Reviews

[closed account]

a simple statement of unconditional love, what I love is that it is simple... that is how love should be!! I love this beyond words...... I may have said this in the past but todate??? MY FAVORITE LOVE POEM OF YOURS!!.... right from your soul!!! lucky women.. :-)

[Katherine Wyatt]

This is truly beautiful..lucky lady!

[Coyote Poetry]

Yes when it is good. We open up and allow the good things in. I like the poem. You told a good story with a very good ending. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Seashell]

Total passionate love from the heart here. Love it so much....oh and your poem's quite good too....teeee heeee. Seriously...it's a lovely write .."My heart is so complete with you in it"... awwwwww

Thanks CB
Babs xxxx

[Fran Marie]

Blissfully romantic and soo well crafted~ simple loverly...

[just rose.]

love this ... it's appreciation for a woman that takes in ALL of her, and that's as it should be, and seldom is. just beautiful!!

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This is a very beautiful and true piece of writing, I found a blend of both honesty and warmth in this.
"Then you in the glow
Of the bedside lamp,
Your face bare and pure." - Loved these lines the most, they are very descriptive and the imagery is very powerful here.
The flow of this piece is also amazingly flawless.
Great work (like always) :)

[EmpressPoetess]

"Without hesitation, no reservations, I am yours"......Complete! I love the whole darling thing! This is the stuff that makes us swoon!

[Annette Jay Sweeney]

Very nice. I like the line about seeing her as most beautiful in the light of the bedside lamp. This is the perfect kind of image to convey this kind of adoration. :)

[Anita B Jacques]

you described how to be "in" love, a pure and perfect love with another human being, I enjoyed reading your poem my friend, keep writing, someday I will again, I will. God Bless.
Hugs

[Wicahpi]

This is just wonderful Mr. Dale!
I like reading 'feel goods' from a man's perspective.
Thank you for sharing. ^5