The Rainbow And Humanity

seeing this rainbow the other day got me thinking

 

Within the rainbow

is the same air I breathe

flowing so naturally

as the oxygen through my lungs.

 

Over the rainbow

is the very same heaven

that created us both,

each with our own unique traits.

 

The end of the rainbow

touches the same soil

I journey upon everyday

while discovering Mother Nature.

 

So it makes me think

that this rainbow is no different

then you and me…

So why does it’s colors

blend so harmoniously

for the world to see

yet colors still clash amongst humanity.

 

Author's Note

Seeing this rainbow the other day got me thinking

Reviews

[Fran Marie]

So why does it’s colors
blend so harmoniously
for the world to see
yet colors still clash amongst humanity.

A most profound poem, with a great message therein,we may never know

the answers to why the colors still clash among humanity, if only the world

could indeed live and blend in harmony, 'alas that cannot be,there will
always be a indifferences of life....

Superb Pen Dale!

[Calypso]

So good!!!

[Shelby. Loves ya. :3]

awesome poem.

[Shellie]

Lovely; amazing the way you take something so simple yet so beautiful and make it so profound and so beautiful

[Katie]

The only word that comes to my mind is beautiful!!!! great job again dale.

[♍ Kirstin ♎]

DUDE!!! Really like this and I love how contridictive (it's not the right word but the best one I can think of - plus it's ment in a good way) the last sanza is =D

[Ashley]

Oh my! This is so beautiful :) I absolutly loved the last stanza. And what an amazing perspective. Why DON'T we blend as the colors do? Mmm just another amazing work by the rock and roll cowboy.

[Bud]

Amen. Excellent humanitarian piece that puts it all in perspective.

[Jamie S.]

Nice work Dale! You got me thinking about auras, if we really do have them and we all could see each others how different would our world be? Must have been a beautiful rainbow :)

[Dupree]

Wow, this is a very impressive piece. The message comes across quite clear and I must say the last stanza is my favorite

[Stacey Watts]

The last lines here are simply brilliant. This is a wonderful piece. I think you painted a very lovely well thought out poem here. I like the message here.