Rebel Heart(Romantic Soul)

A quick look within myself

 

I find no comforts

Conforming to the walls

That society built

Yet I feel right at home

Within the walls of love

That one woman built.

 

Guess I’m just a rebel at heart

With a romantic soul.

 

That is who I am,

Who I want to be,

How I will remain

For forever and a day.

Reviews

[Georgia Gypsy]

The image i see is that love is an open book, waiting for the pages to be written on with lovely words, beautiful moments, and no one can enclose them into man made walls---the mere existance of love between two people is soulful, spiritual, and eternal.
Wonderful glimpse into your heart.

[Miss Coral]

Love this piece... simple, concise, and sweet. Wonderful.

[zombiikillah666]

awwwh. i really like this.
soooo gooood. xD

[Sorry Infamous]

Nothing wrong with being a romantic!

[The Analog Kid]

Personal, yet so universal, right? It's a diachotomy of the hard-edged man with a soft lover of a woman. Nice.

[An owl on the moon]

There is such a deep message in your words... that love builds stronger walls than governments or laws or cities ever could. Thank you for sharing a glimpse into your heart, my friend. Don't ever change.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Good kind of rebel to be... and to have a romantic heart.
I like this ..



I find no comforts

Conforming to the walls

That society built

Yet I feel right at home

Within the walls of love

That one woman built.

A nice verse!

[Hazy Daze]

Good stuff, I think a lot of people have felt this way before and you capture the emotion pretty well i think.

[Aussie]

F****n mind reader.

[StacyPerry]

Love is a powerful emotion and the many descriptions vary.