Astronomical Consequences

Astronomical Consequences

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

 

Every slip of the tongue

Is another shooting star

       I miss…

              Can’t wish upon.

Within the moon’s protective glare

Are the secrets that sleep

During the day…

       If awoken by the sunrays

The earth’s axis would dry up

Causing the world to stop spinning

Making high noon and the witching hour

One in the same…

       Two personalities

              Becoming one

Till the sky is a permanent gray

Before the big bang.

© 2010 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)


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This is a really interesting spin on the Hegelian dialectic i.e. thesis, antithesis, synthesis. It's interesting to see what happens when opposites collide ... it seems there is a sort of dullness or sameness suggested that nevertheless precludes a further, startling action. What interests me also is the emotion that may have informed this lofty thinking ... I often measure who and what I am against that light from the stars, which started many years before just to reach my eyes. Brilliant. Great line breaks too. Very lyrical and effective RRC.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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"Every slip of the tongue
Is another shooting star
I miss…
Can’t wish upon."

A great start to pull the reader into this. Intriguing write, I liked where your must took you with this poem.


Posted 14 Years Ago


Now this is deep...
Intriguing and intellectual!
Well done :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very interesting and makes me think, its as if being separate things are more glorious but combined they become dull and uninteresting. So its as if we should be alert and not let things get dull, be careful not to let chances slip by us. I'm not sure if this even makes any sense!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a really interesting spin on the Hegelian dialectic i.e. thesis, antithesis, synthesis. It's interesting to see what happens when opposites collide ... it seems there is a sort of dullness or sameness suggested that nevertheless precludes a further, startling action. What interests me also is the emotion that may have informed this lofty thinking ... I often measure who and what I am against that light from the stars, which started many years before just to reach my eyes. Brilliant. Great line breaks too. Very lyrical and effective RRC.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love this first line:Every slip of the tongue
Is another shooting star
I miss…
Brings the poem together.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WOW.... this was very interesting
I am taking part of this poem and
running with it, relating it into
my own life..

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

It's better to be dead and cool than alive and uncool



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Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..

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