All Weather

a haiku of life

 

Sun, rain, snow or hail

The weather’s always perfect

Through my rising breath

 

Reviews

[Tina Kline]

I see you sitting back in a lawn chair perhaps or just lying on the earth itself as the weather just falls all around you and your gazing up at it with your breath rising up to intermingle with the weather that is falling down. And sunshine shines down so it fits.

Fantastic job!

[Ed Hart]

Yes, everything is always perfect, like it or not. I wonder if it will help if we change our definition of perfect. I like the way you say big things in small packages...Ed

[Phibby Venable]

beautiful and perfect..yes, just being alive says alot! great work.

[Wicahpi]

a lovely Haiku in any kind of weather!

[cest la vie]

Well done.. so much said in such a tiny space..

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this poem. Truth in your last words. A excellent poem. You said it all in 14 words.
Coyote

[Georgia Gypsy]

I keep saying i'm going to write a Haiku...then i shy away from it, too many rules:)...
You go my friend, you and your bad self!!:)

[J.P. Bristow]

this was very positive---and yet another wonderful write full of great imagery.

[closed account]

very nice Dale, you executed, delieverd and justified a Haiku!!!!!
:-)