All Weather

a haiku of life

 

Sun, rain, snow or hail

The weather’s always perfect

Through my rising breath

 

Reviews

[Tina Kline]

I see you sitting back in a lawn chair perhaps or just lying on the earth itself as the weather just falls all around you and your gazing up at it with your breath rising up to intermingle with the weather that is falling down. And sunshine shines down so it fits.

Fantastic job!

[emmajoy]

Perfect haiku too. Seems you take things as they are, seeing the positive .. a half full glass kind of man - the best kind.

Beautiful flow, utter meaning.

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Great haiku... awesome word choices that flow together really nicely! A high sense of being alive and breathing.. and deeming life perfect for all the imperfections that are the elements in this place.. very lovely!

[Glenn Davis]

Very nice and relatable (or at least inspirational) in so many different ways. A wonderful Haiku.

[An owl on the moon]

A very powerfully profound Haiku! You demonstrate a courage and hope to see a bit of good in every kind of weather. Just loved the feeling this created!

[Star Wolf]

Really nice haiku. Creates a real peaceful feeling.

[Narnie]

Finely done. A haiku is something I would never attempt so all credit to you, Cowboy :)

[SoulofManyFaces]

Through the seasons we still remain strong...that's what this
poem says to me:).

[Millionth Muse]

What a beautiful haiku...I'm glad that I stumbled upon it. This really reminds me of the importance of being thankful you're alive, no matter the season, the circumstance...be happy you're breathing. LOL Nicely written!

[Brianna Brie]

This is deep! I wouldn't by any means say my life is perfect, but it is mine, and for that I wouldn't trade it for any other. Excellent haiku!

[Jenny Nelson]

The point that as long as you're alive, it's good perhaps? Or maybe suggesting contentment with what you have instead of always wanting what you don't have.
Nice write that says a lot in a few words. Very pleasant.