All Weather

a haiku of life

 

Sun, rain, snow or hail

The weather’s always perfect

Through my rising breath

 

Reviews

[Tina Kline]

I see you sitting back in a lawn chair perhaps or just lying on the earth itself as the weather just falls all around you and your gazing up at it with your breath rising up to intermingle with the weather that is falling down. And sunshine shines down so it fits.

Fantastic job!

[Jola]

The weather is like our dream ... when it rains dreams become distant ... When the sun shines all becomes more real ... Good haiku :)

[Lauren Beth]

Nice haiku. I love that so much is said in so little words!

[123456789]

This is awesome!

Check out mine?

[Poeticpiers]

as long as your breathing no reason to complain overmuch

[Jamie S.]

Way to keep your cup half full!! Cabin fever has nothing on you :)

[Stacey Watts]

Very well said here. It is a wonderful little seasonal haiku..

[Ladysue]

This is great...A positive outlook. Going with the flow... A content feeling and a wonderful haiku...

[Tracie Skarbo]

mmm I like this one. It goes with your avatar perfectly!

[An Ordinary Woman]

Nice, Cowboy. It gave me an image of ya sitting in the backyard in a recliner. Leaning back, all comfy. Maybe that's a beer or a cup of hot coffee. Either way, I'm glad you keep a pos outlook. That's sooo important these days.

Smiles and huggs

[Theresa]

A perfect haiku. Short and sweet I love that. I know I could never do it. It's kind of like it doesn't matter what the weather is because you are alive and able to be apart of it. Nicely done.