War, peace, war and peace again..but never ending as you duly note in your write. It has all been predicted, and man tries to fix it, "right it" so to say, but we are unable to perform a full exorcism so doomsday still looms before us. It is sadly, the folly of man!
Deep, and reflective....wonderful!
So many lines in your poem are true for us in today world. I hope for a encore...reborn. But something in this world were gifts wasted and lost. A outstanding poem. You said so much in so few words.
Coyote
This is about how we are making our own he'll right here, a he'll of our own doing? The language in this is intense and strong, as well as the emotions it brings out. Great writing!
War, peace, war and peace again..but never ending as you duly note in your write. It has all been predicted, and man tries to fix it, "right it" so to say, but we are unable to perform a full exorcism so doomsday still looms before us. It is sadly, the folly of man!
Deep, and reflective....wonderful!
.. and the wheels on the bus go round and round.. same old song, different day.. When will humanity learn from past mistakes.baffles logic..
Excellent eye opening write..
wow... this is a great look at human folly and what we do to the earth...she can only take so much of the childrens tantrums until one day the scales are turned and there is no going back. Excellent...
Unfortunately this world will stop spinning or at least shift in direction...and
all will be reborn again. Mans injustice to Mother Nature will come full circle.
A truthful write; much insight! Well done!
It's better to be dead and cool than alive and uncool
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Birth name: Dale Deadmond
Born November 20th, 1969
Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate.
This is my world of
my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..