It reminds me of the saying "Mirror Mirror on the wall I am my mother after all." Something so many people swear they will never be, but always find traces of them within. A wonderful write that is very powerful. In the end though you will be who you want to be and the traces of your parents will be their good qualities. =)
I absolutely love it. I was left wanting more. Very good choice for the title to be so pivotal in explaining the story.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Poignant, and very well done Dale. I see here such a awareness in your write, at least you see it, and you fear it maybe, but the way of healing is to fear it. You shall beat this monster in the mirror, quicker than you might think ;) wonderful write. just wonderful. And recognizable, as the red cord always needs to be free, and solved and seen... it touched me deeply.
What a powerfully profound write, filled with feelings of such pain and sadness. It can be so very haunting to encounter those dark things buried deep within us... Amazing poem.
It's better to be dead and cool than alive and uncool
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Birth name: Dale Deadmond
Born November 20th, 1969
Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate.
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my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..