My Heartbeat

My Heartbeat

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
"

I haiku you

"

 

You are my heartbeat

Pumping pure red through my chest

Letting me feel life.

© 2009 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)


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This makes me smile. Love the "I haiku you".

Posted 14 Years Ago
Wonderful new found Love is oooooozing from this great write. Thanks for sharing !!!
Babs xx

Posted 14 Years Ago
This is such a powerful expression of love and devotion. I am amazed at what you did with the haiku form... with just three lines you say so much!

Posted 14 Years Ago
Nice job on this one! Its a simple, sweet declaration. Great job on it.

Posted 14 Years Ago
wow very short but i definatly feel the meaning of it

Posted 14 Years Ago
You said it perfectly in those three lines.
Wonderful!

Posted 14 Years Ago
Right to the point. Without someone to love, you no longer beat. Leaving you lifeless. Great!

Posted 14 Years Ago
very nice!!! I loved it!!! I soooo love Haikus...

Posted 14 Years Ago
Me likes very much!

Posted 14 Years Ago
"you are my heartbeat" ahh! I love this- s much said in such little words. Amazing!

Posted 14 Years Ago

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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

It's better to be dead and cool than alive and uncool



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Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..

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