Nature's Serenade

 

 Sounds of pure droplets

Cascading over leaves and petals

Hums a silent tune of harmony

That can only be heard

Echoing through the chambers

Of the gentle at heart.

 

Soft pattering of liquid crystals

Massages Mother Earth’s sacred body

So she can sing a song of peace

From the core of her being

To the soul of humanity

As a reminder of God’s hope.

 

Rainbow kissed showers

Decant like fallen angel’s tears

After listening to the ballad

Of those blinded by faith

Causing an eternal glistening

Lighting the way like an answered prayer.

 

There is nothing like the miracle

Of nature’s serenade

For just look to the sky and see

It is always heaven sent.

Reviews

[Georgia Gypsy]

The beautiful imagry and peacefullness of this is mesmerizing....like witnessing the soft rain and feeling the prayer and hope it brings with it.
This is the perfect food for the thought type poem, I feel refreshed and happy from reading it, makes me want to read it more than once to allow the words to seep into my soul.

[Magdelena]

Oh my! This was not only beautiful, it was surreal! The imagery in your words made me feel like i was floating.. Cowboy this was fab!! Inspiration all the way. What a peaceful feeling I recieved after the read..
This is a real winner for sure in my eyes..

Mag xx

[Theresa]

This is really great especially how you turn rain, a thing so many people despise, into such a beautiful thing. I was going to highlight one of my favorite lines or verses, but I can't decide they are all so full of imagery and I sincerely love them all. Such a wonderful piece.

[Stacey Watts]

Very soft peaceful elegant piece. Excellent job with the imagery that is purely sensitive and gentle.

[Manyfacets]

My goodness: your presentation of this poem is out of this world! The flow of the poem is just perfect. Wonderful work indeed.

[Ellen Hammond]

This is so serene and soothing. Your analogies are amazing and show what a multi-talented writer you are. I really love this one. The pics are great too.

[Sheila Kline]

Absolutely stunning!....one of my very favorities of yours as it is gentle, spiritual, and just beautiful!
There are many beautiful lines, but my top pick is:

Soft pattering of liquid crystals
Massage Mother's Earths sacred body

As the rain touches the earth, spiritual renewal as well as healing of the earth occurs. You have given us so much to think about in your words!

This is surely going in my fav's file!

[An owl on the moon]

This is such a sweetly sacred piece, flowing like the beauty of the rain. It seems to be an inspired write, close to your heart, this song of the earth... Absolutely wonderful and moving!

[Wildfleour]

Sweet!

[closed account]

a very wonderful write,, the sound of rain the smell and touh of it is so peaceful
I hope we get some soon... love the pictures!!! awesome work!

[Wicahpi]

I couldn't agree more! Lovely, just lovely.