Nature's Serenade

 

 Sounds of pure droplets

Cascading over leaves and petals

Hums a silent tune of harmony

That can only be heard

Echoing through the chambers

Of the gentle at heart.

 

Soft pattering of liquid crystals

Massages Mother Earth’s sacred body

So she can sing a song of peace

From the core of her being

To the soul of humanity

As a reminder of God’s hope.

 

Rainbow kissed showers

Decant like fallen angel’s tears

After listening to the ballad

Of those blinded by faith

Causing an eternal glistening

Lighting the way like an answered prayer.

 

There is nothing like the miracle

Of nature’s serenade

For just look to the sky and see

It is always heaven sent.

Reviews

[Georgia Gypsy]

The beautiful imagry and peacefullness of this is mesmerizing....like witnessing the soft rain and feeling the prayer and hope it brings with it.
This is the perfect food for the thought type poem, I feel refreshed and happy from reading it, makes me want to read it more than once to allow the words to seep into my soul.

[Helena Parris]

I love rain. Love to watch it, smell it, walk in it, listen to it on the roof, on the leaves. Your poem creates that imagery beautifully. I love this poem, period!

[Lauren Beth]

I don't know what else to say that hasn't been said already. Just Beautiful!!

[Dezaraye]

I love rainstorms. My favorite ones are the ones in the spring and in the fall. Last week, we had the most glorious rain and I loved it.

Thanks for sharing this gem with us. It so beautifully echoes my thoughts and feelings.

[Bare trees]

This is a great poem with great imagery and thought process. "That can only be heard echoing through the chambers of the gentle at heart." Wow! I've only pointed out that line, but the entire poem is very well written and I can see you've used your powers of observation well. Loved the pictures too, I would love to get pictures like that someday for my stuff. BTW, I found you through Manyfacets, I'll be reading more of your work for sure.

[anonymous]

Beautiful imagery indeed .. By the ways, thanks for the reviews! Greatly appreciated =]

[Amethyst Moon]

This poem makes my spirit feel so refreshed as if I just bathed in crystal spring water, such iridescent beauty you portray in your words and imagery. Great work. Thank you so much for your review.

[emmajoy]

Sooo like the first pic... sooooooo love the second one - it's wonderful!

And now for your poem. How do you do it every time?! Your words just run like a trickling silver stream, they're full of beauty and gentleness, reminding us where it all starts and finishes .. -

'Soft pattering of liquid crystals ~ Massages Mother Earth's sacred body ~ So she can sing a song of peace'

Thank you, thank you for sharing a painting in words.

[Fran Marie]

There is nothing like the miracle
Of nature's serenade
For just look to the sky and see
It is always heaven sent.

Whoa, this is just so Awesome ~ Beautfully penned and deeply expressed

in heavenly poetic verse~ you go to the head of the class with this onE!!

An (A+) plus all the way~ btw love the outstanding rain pics~ complements your

verse beautifully! Thanks for sharing in the Autumn's Bouquet Contest!

[ABitBrokenPoetry]

"So she can sing a song of peace
From the core of her being
To the soul of humanity " what a breathtaking piece! loved it, every word was perfect. such amazing & beautiful imagery, showing the true power of nature. a truly brilliant write!

[Phibby Venable]

wonderful pictures and quite a tribute to Mother Earth!