Hocus Pocus

Some more Halloween fun :)

  

Hocus pocus

Toil and trouble

You sly little witch

It’s plain to see

That you cast a spell on me.

Setting my soul a flame

Till I am down on my knees

Collecting the ashes

and arrange into

a perfect circle.

 

You did it without

Any black magic or potion

For within that cauldron

Was something more powerful.

With a pinch of enchanting beauty

With a mix of wicked charm,

Toss in a smidge of seductive charisma

And finish it off with a piece of golden heart.

 

Never has a curse

Been more alluring

Nor the darkside

More attractive

Till the day you made me

Your adoring warlock.

Reviews

[Magdelena]

Very nice one here Cowboy! I loved the imagery inside.. The lightness that flowed straight off the paper.. This had a different feel than most of your others, kind of like your piece on the rain.. (LOVED THAT) Ooops.. LOL
This by far was a treasure and shows your multi talents in more ways than one.. Great job!

Mag xx

[Tracie Skarbo]

LOL I love the images you have conjured with this one...:) Great for the holidays too! I know someone who is eager to be out there trick or treating...although I think you are looking for more of a treat with this one...big smiles. Nicely done!!

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

I liked that. It was very cute and catchy. A perfect theme for Halloween coming up very soon. hmmm, I wonder who that woman is? She sure knows how to catch em! lol.

kena

[Voice]

I love it it's my two favorite things combined...love poems and Halloween!!! Great write!!!

Voice

[An owl on the moon]

Your write is perfect for the season and put a smile on my face on a chilly autumn morning. Thank you for this fun celebration of the magic of love! We could all use a little more enchantment!

[Bud]

I can see a lot of realistic truth in this one! Isn't that the way it often goes? Come, my little targeted new subject. My wish is your command. Do as I say, for I am...the one who holds your heart captive, until I decide to throw it away. You are nothing more than my muse, one in which I will use to my own wicked sinister desires, my new found fallen from grace Friar! Excellent portrayal, and mirroring of real life behavior, Dale! Keep up the Masterfully penned works of creative art, my friend!

[!FireCracker!]

Now, that, is wicked! Trick or treat Cowboy, i'll be knocking on your door this year!

[Stacey Watts]

It is a cute poem. Nice little Halloween seduction. Well done.

[.Bunnie.]

^.^ Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwz Cowboy......!!! XOX This is SO CUTE!!! I absolutely LOVE IT! :D You're such a sweet guy. Halloween ROX MY SOX TOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

And..."couldern" should be "cauldron"! :P

[Jamie S.]

Cackle..Cackle...I love it, such a creative way to stir the coldrin of love with your pen!! So is she a good witch or a bad witch? lol, great holiday writing!

[Sheila Kline]

Uh oh.....another one caught under the spell of love with a potion of alluring capture, and "Be thou mine".....clever and well crafted..pun intended..smiles
Sounds like they are having a "devil" of a good time!!