Hocus Pocus

Some more Halloween fun :)

  

Hocus pocus

Toil and trouble

You sly little witch

It’s plain to see

That you cast a spell on me.

Setting my soul a flame

Till I am down on my knees

Collecting the ashes

and arrange into

a perfect circle.

 

You did it without

Any black magic or potion

For within that cauldron

Was something more powerful.

With a pinch of enchanting beauty

With a mix of wicked charm,

Toss in a smidge of seductive charisma

And finish it off with a piece of golden heart.

 

Never has a curse

Been more alluring

Nor the darkside

More attractive

Till the day you made me

Your adoring warlock.

Reviews

[Magdelena]

Very nice one here Cowboy! I loved the imagery inside.. The lightness that flowed straight off the paper.. This had a different feel than most of your others, kind of like your piece on the rain.. (LOVED THAT) Ooops.. LOL
This by far was a treasure and shows your multi talents in more ways than one.. Great job!

Mag xx

[Tree]

Women are ALL powerful. They still scare the !#$%!! out of me. I blame everything bad that has ever happened to me on that spell (back in 95'). Great little Halloween piece Dale ;)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Yes they are so wicked and yet so desirable. we never stand a chance under their spell.

[Bare trees]

Excellent poem. It suits the halloween mood just right and speaks of an unending love.

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

This is awesome, Cowboy. Magical and enchanting at best. Loved this.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I love it!

[Liza]

ahhhh; you leave me speechless...an alluring curse of being selected as the favorite object of adoration.

[Poetic Beauty]

I like the magical halloween feel to this piece. The imagery is done quite well. Beware for the mysterious woman can reek havoc on your soul.

[Helen Woodward]

HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Nicely arranged!
You truly are good at this Dale...setting a scene is what I mean. This has a twist on the usual Halloween stuff in that it alludes to women in general. I wonder if the consensus of opinion dictates that all of us stir the cauldron to entice with magic potions?...I WISH!! Something a little different from you here Dale...
Enjoyed :)

[Dupree]

Awww this is a very well written yet entirely cute poem. I rather enjoyed it, though I am partial to anything halloween... I'm a lover of halloween.

[Hustle Consciousness]

i see someone is quite in the halloween spirit lol thats really good... i just cant lol for some reason this poem made me giggle lol it was something like campfire story... with a sense of romance! lol a new perspective of halloween for me ...awesome scribes :)

[Alicia Schroeder]

Awesome, I love this one, great witchy write..