Pure Lust

a sexy haiku

  

From those soft red lips

To your voluptuous thighs

You’re my desire.

Reviews

[MarkGMelvin]

Very well put short and to the point,Well done.

[~LeeAnn~]

Short and sweet....or should I say short and sexy.

[Fran Marie]

OhhLala Sexy haiku to be sure~this one! is HOTT!

[An Ordinary Woman]

Ohhhhhhhh myyyyyyyyyy.

Very nice. I like it. Straight forward and direct. It's, it's it's ... I can't think of the word I'm looking for and I wonder why? LOL Very good writing, friend! It left this reader speechless!

[Ich bin das Giftmä..]

*opens her mouth to say something dirty and then shuts up* Another short fun poem good job

[Gandré]

wowww Dale.... this I love. succinct and accurate!

[Stacey Watts]

Short sweet and to the point. But very few words say it all. excellent piece.

[cilla]

Sigh ... and Valentine's Day still months away ...

[closed account]

wonderful haiku,,, at first I was like,,, hmmmm ****voluptuous**** maybe too many?? btw would not have mattered, but then it was like BAM,,, he nailed it!! great job

it was romantic, sweet and hella sexy!!!!!!

[Sheila Kline]

Hey Cowboy.....what a way to start my day...sign in and read THESE JUICY WORDS!!!!....short and sweet...BUT SWAYS SO MUCH.. or,SAYS SO MUCH..EITHER WAY..SEXY!