In Those Moments

I'm a hopeless romantic, so sue me, LOL

  

In those moments of good times

It gives me no greater pleasure

Then to share them with you.

For it turns such treasured times

Into priceless memories

For two minds wrapped in

A heart built for deuce.

 

In those moments of sorrow

We stand side by side

As our hearts become pillars

Of strength leaning on one another,

Not even Hercules can knock them over.

They say there is strength in numbers

But here two is like a packed stadium.

 

In those moments of disagreement

Harsh words may get spoken

But the sharp edges are padded

By the faith in one another

To ensure that the wounds

Are always temporary.

 

In those moments of passion

We get lost in the heat of the night

Causing the embers of desire

To shine like a beacon.

The sweat created between us

Is the dew from a rainforest

Ensuring desire won’t dry up

And become extinct.

 

Every moment of every day

Says that we are without a doubt

Forever love.

 

 

Reviews

[Sheila Kline]

Oh Dale...how precious, and I echo your sentiments from the flickering of candlelight, the soft kisses, tender embraces, flowers gracing the table. To be a romantic is a gift of one's heart to another!
Please don't ever stop being just who you are, as your romanticism gives us these beautiful poems of love....of forever love!

[Katie]

Whooa! I'm in love with this poem! Each stanza that is written is precious when you have someone to love.. Even in time of sorrow, and argument- they don't seem so terrible if you have your love one to share it with.. What a GREAT piece! I love it!!

[Melissa Rose]

Incredible. Not many of the male gender are so comfortable in sharing their romantic feelings, let alone expressing it through poetry. It's very wonderful and refreshing to see. Nice write:)

[ape domenigoni]

This is beautiful...how love should be, not full of hate, jealousy and competition like so many are. Keep up the great writing...

[emmajoy]

You romantic you!

This poem is written with such style and caring, as if you've dipped into honeyed gold and inscribed your feelings into the heavens.

'Forever love.' - no matter what happens between you is so very precious and your lines build up into those two last words so delicately but logically - because that's what a real relationship has to be, delicate and logical, accepting the not so good along with the good.

'By the faith in one another' that you'll remain close and loving

'The sweat created between us ~ Is the dew from a rainforest' what wonderfully passionate sentences and such vital emotions between two people who love.

Thank you for sharing.



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[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Nicely penned. A sweet and miraculous occurence when two can become One. Thank you.
Light,
Siddartha

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Beautiful and love , true love lasts forever beyond miles. beyond death love goes on and on .. gonna save this one .. Chloe xoxo

[Sorry Infamous]

I always like you honest warm love poems the best. They always give me hope for men after all. :)

[Amant Cache]

Reading this piece makes a person really want to solidify their relationships....nice work!

[Jessica Fox]

What a sweet poem and yes it is full of mush and hopeless romantic stuff good job

[Magdelena]

Now this was divine! You brought forth such sweet words and images of love that I felt myself sigh from within.. Romance at its finest... I so loved it!




Peace;
Magdelena