Ticking Heart

just a haiku

  

Every second counts

Just as every heartbeat does

So live your time now.

Reviews

[Stephanie]

That is amazing.... To fit such a big idea into three little lines. But then, that's the mark of a talented writer! This couldn't be more true- to live every second of your life like it will be your last, like your heart's clock is ticking down. Time wasted is time you can't get back. There's so much I can grab out of this haiku, Dale. This is definitely going into my favorites and my friends are getting some read requests. Flawless and beautiful job :]

[closed account]

an absolute beautiful haiku
just what the doctor ordered
thanks for sharing your wonderful
talent and putting things back in
my frame,, even though you didn't
know that this poem was going to
do that for me..

[Devilyn]

Thats what life should be about! Good write =)

[A]

I agree! :) Great lines!