Ticking Heart

just a haiku

  

Every second counts

Just as every heartbeat does

So live your time now.

Reviews

[Stephanie]

That is amazing.... To fit such a big idea into three little lines. But then, that's the mark of a talented writer! This couldn't be more true- to live every second of your life like it will be your last, like your heart's clock is ticking down. Time wasted is time you can't get back. There's so much I can grab out of this haiku, Dale. This is definitely going into my favorites and my friends are getting some read requests. Flawless and beautiful job :]

[Helen Woodward]

A haiku with a succinct kick...short, stern and to the point...FABULOUS!!!
*smiles*

[An owl on the moon]

This is a brilliant haiku, with a profound, vibrant message that so clearly speaks to each of us... no matter where we may find ourselves. We must live for this moment and then in every moment on... Excellent!

[Shelle]

Perfect! :)

[Shadow Writer]

Wise words Cowboy. ty PS

[Stacey Watts]

No truer words have ever been said. Well done.

[Bud]

The greatest message one can give. Excellent! Your Talent shines through time and again, Dale!

[Sorry Infamous]

What a great message this little number has.
Powerful, brief... the perfect haiku.

[Lauren Beth]

A great haiku! Such a grand message you portray with so few words, I love it. Something about life I think everyone should learn. Nice job as always. Live everyday like it was your last!

[QuietPoet]

Sooooo true. This was great. So short, but right to the point. Nice job.